Claire by Marchbold

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Claire

An observational shortie.
Marty can't talk to Claire and yet...

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Posted Sun, 02/08/2009 - 21:58 by Marchbold

An observational shortie.
Marty can't talk to Claire and yet...

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I loved it. I don't know who they are, what relationship they have or what the future holds ... but I was hooked. I wanted to know what happens to them, I wanted Marty's condition explained, and I wanted to see a blossoming of something ... in the full knowledge that the journey had very little chance of being a happy or comfortable one. Excellent.

diggerwebster says on - 18 March 2009

A deep, poignant story, made all the more so by the contrast with it's upper-most surface of sparkling wit, energy and fun. Lovely! Very moving.

AMReid says on - 18 March 2009
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