This is a very important topic to write about and the essay is a good start at that. The satirical allegory makes it all the more appealing, although there is definitely room for improvement in terms of style. I think the piece would be much stronger if its argument developed further.
burcu says on - 18 March 2009
Just thought it ended a bit quick, it was perfect for what it was, but just needed following through a bit further, for me anyway
Drew says on - 18 March 2009
This is definitely topical
rizwana says on - 18 March 2009
This is definitely topical even if the event is out of date. very raraely is something painfully hilarious and poignant, but this piece achieves it.
A not so topical, but unfortunately still political sattire of our allies in Pakistan.
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This all still holds
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ianjamescox says on - 18 March 2009This is a very important topic to write about and the essay is a good start at that. The satirical allegory makes it all the more appealing, although there is definitely room for improvement in terms of style. I think the piece would be much stronger if its argument developed further.
burcu says on - 18 March 2009Just thought it ended a bit quick, it was perfect for what it was, but just needed following through a bit further, for me anyway
Drew says on - 18 March 2009This is definitely topical
rizwana says on - 18 March 2009This is definitely topical even if the event is out of date. very raraely is something painfully hilarious and poignant, but this piece achieves it.
A pure writing talent
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